I havent been writing much lately but I penned this one recently.
It's a down n dirty recording to flesh out the production so its kind of sloppy as far as quality goes...any suggestions? Does it need a bridge maybe?
Thanks for the input
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8011181
The better...
Well...I occasionally write songs for my girlfriend ya know?...sappy lil love songs that never see the light of day except for her...she digs that kind of thing. But they're usually acoustic kinds of things full of flowers and rainbows, so to speak.
So me and the girlfriend have been having...
Working with a new mixer...this is what I wrote to try it out.
Titled "Hell to pay"
It's a short track I may lengthen out another minute or so.
Give me the good, bad & the ugly eh?
Feel free to comment on any other tracks you feel like listening to also. It really does help me improve.
Hell...
Hey all
been a couple years since Ive recorded anything. Two new songs at the top of the list...
One's titled "Sometimes" and the other is "Never gonna let you go"
I know the mixes aren't great [it is NOT like riding a bike hehehe] so Im just curious about the writing/production...a few...
This is the 2nd half of a song about 5 friends that died in a carwreck when I was 17...Like the other one I have posted, this is short. More than anything I wanted to pass on a raw feeling, without any pretense to being "pretty" and still feel like a ballad. this is also part of a concept CD...
This is something fun Ive been working on. Please give me your opinions on the writing if you would...the mix/arrangement too if you feel like it but Im more interested in feedback on the writing as this is a bit "left field". I know its a short song (2.26) but its part of a larger concept CD...
Hey all. I need some outside opinions on this. Its a power ballad kinna thing.
Too obscure?...gah! I hate being my own worst critic!!
Thanks!
FS
Darkness
Verse
Ghosts in the rain
Blurry souls with no names
Fighting to survive
No one meets the eye
Drowning in the life
That passes them by...
I really am burnt out on life right now, and that don't help me decide if this is a lemon or not (yea I know...only I could know that)
The hook is in the acoustic guitar riff so without an mp3 you prolly won't find it nearly as catchy as I do hehe
Anyways...tell me what sucks and what don't if...
Not nearly as easy to write for a female voice as I thought it would be. Im looking for outside opinion on this rough start...
Its over very sparse acoustic picking, the whole vibe leans toward very little arrangement but I think it needs a bridge (and cant come up with one musically!! argh!)...
a midi vocal guide track is set up? I keep reading people referring to this to help stay in key while laying vocal tracks but I dont get it.
Im thinking its using the notes in the midi grid to "sing" the notes with a midi instrument (does the instrument matter? violin? bass? drums? hehehe)...
It seems I'm channeling ghosts nowadays hehe...wrote this the other morning while searching for elusive #10. Its really caught my attention cus it just kinna "came out" ya know and its such a vivid tale [for me anyways]. fun to play...its Dm/Cadd(something...7..9?)/G. Around 150bpm...
Hey all...been a while. Took a break. Wrote a bunch. Recorded alot. I'll throw this to the wolves :eek: It was almost titled Cancer sucks! but thought that lacked a certain marketability :D what do you think?
Enjoy!
WITHER
Intro
Wither away
Wither my soul
<Repeat 1x>
Verse
See the...