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    Rough track....comments?

    I havent been writing much lately but I penned this one recently. It's a down n dirty recording to flesh out the production so its kind of sloppy as far as quality goes...any suggestions? Does it need a bridge maybe? Thanks for the input http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8011181 The better...
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    New track "Just say it"...Should I give it to her?

    Well...I occasionally write songs for my girlfriend ya know?...sappy lil love songs that never see the light of day except for her...she digs that kind of thing. But they're usually acoustic kinds of things full of flowers and rainbows, so to speak. So me and the girlfriend have been having...
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    New Track "Hell to pay"...anybody want to let me know what ya think?

    Working with a new mixer...this is what I wrote to try it out. Titled "Hell to pay" It's a short track I may lengthen out another minute or so. Give me the good, bad & the ugly eh? Feel free to comment on any other tracks you feel like listening to also. It really does help me improve. Hell...
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    Suffocating

    I'm hoping to get some comments on this...its still a work in progress and I need the input...good bad and ugly hehehe You can listen to it here Thanks to anyone commenting! Suffocating © 2008 by Matt Brosnan All these years And all the tears Here they come again Same old fears Just like it...
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    A few songs to comment on

    Take a listen, tell me what you think Lemming Scream
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    Comments welcome

    Hi all, Take a fw minutes to listen to a few tracks from Lemming Scream's last CD...comments appreciated Thanks! Lemming Scream's Myspace ...
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    Couple new songs after 2 year hiatus

    Hey all been a couple years since Ive recorded anything. Two new songs at the top of the list... One's titled "Sometimes" and the other is "Never gonna let you go" I know the mixes aren't great [it is NOT like riding a bike hehehe] so Im just curious about the writing/production...a few...
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    New track, "Fade Away (pt 2)"...comments?

    This is the 2nd half of a song about 5 friends that died in a carwreck when I was 17...Like the other one I have posted, this is short. More than anything I wanted to pass on a raw feeling, without any pretense to being "pretty" and still feel like a ballad. this is also part of a concept CD...
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    New track, "The Herd"...comments?

    This is something fun Ive been working on. Please give me your opinions on the writing if you would...the mix/arrangement too if you feel like it but Im more interested in feedback on the writing as this is a bit "left field". I know its a short song (2.26) but its part of a larger concept CD...
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    Beat it like it stole your wallet...crit??

    Hey all. I need some outside opinions on this. Its a power ballad kinna thing. Too obscure?...gah! I hate being my own worst critic!! Thanks! FS Darkness Verse Ghosts in the rain Blurry souls with no names Fighting to survive No one meets the eye Drowning in the life That passes them by...
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    Burnt out again...tear em apart or prop em up please

    I really am burnt out on life right now, and that don't help me decide if this is a lemon or not (yea I know...only I could know that) The hook is in the acoustic guitar riff so without an mp3 you prolly won't find it nearly as catchy as I do hehe Anyways...tell me what sucks and what don't if...
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    A side project with my 12 yr old daughter...help!

    Not nearly as easy to write for a female voice as I thought it would be. Im looking for outside opinion on this rough start... Its over very sparse acoustic picking, the whole vibe leans toward very little arrangement but I think it needs a bridge (and cant come up with one musically!! argh!)...
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    Could someone explain how...

    a midi vocal guide track is set up? I keep reading people referring to this to help stay in key while laying vocal tracks but I dont get it. Im thinking its using the notes in the midi grid to "sing" the notes with a midi instrument (does the instrument matter? violin? bass? drums? hehehe)...
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    The pile of crumpled pieces of paper gets higher and higher...

    It seems I'm channeling ghosts nowadays hehe...wrote this the other morning while searching for elusive #10. Its really caught my attention cus it just kinna "came out" ya know and its such a vivid tale [for me anyways]. fun to play...its Dm/Cadd(something...7..9?)/G. Around 150bpm...
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    Wither...comments?

    Hey all...been a while. Took a break. Wrote a bunch. Recorded alot. I'll throw this to the wolves :eek: It was almost titled Cancer sucks! but thought that lacked a certain marketability :D what do you think? Enjoy! WITHER Intro Wither away Wither my soul <Repeat 1x> Verse See the...
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