Fat_Satchel
I suffer Narcoleptic Rage
I havent been writing much lately but I penned this one recently.
It's a down n dirty recording to flesh out the production so its kind of sloppy as far as quality goes...any suggestions? Does it need a bridge maybe?
Thanks for the input
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8011181
The better part of me
A crowded darkness as I step into the light
A jaded pantomime of me
The fading shadows paint my thoughts across the walls
Hoping there’s something there you’ll see
You were always the first to smile
You were always there waiting
Waiting all the while
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
The show is over as the actors take their bows
You know I know my way around a stage
It’s sort of clever in an ordinary way
And you were never the less, still fooled
You were always the last to leave
Standing there alone, still applauding me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
...
It's a down n dirty recording to flesh out the production so its kind of sloppy as far as quality goes...any suggestions? Does it need a bridge maybe?
Thanks for the input
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8011181
The better part of me
A crowded darkness as I step into the light
A jaded pantomime of me
The fading shadows paint my thoughts across the walls
Hoping there’s something there you’ll see
You were always the first to smile
You were always there waiting
Waiting all the while
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
The show is over as the actors take their bows
You know I know my way around a stage
It’s sort of clever in an ordinary way
And you were never the less, still fooled
You were always the last to leave
Standing there alone, still applauding me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
After all the good-byes
After all these lonely late nights
You’re still the better part of me
I don’t know why
You still feel so lonely
...