Beat it like it stole your wallet...crit??

[Fat_Satchel]

Hey all. I need some outside opinions on this. Its a power ballad kinna thing.

Too obscure?...gah! I hate being my own worst critic!!

Thanks!

FS

Darkness

Verse
Ghosts in the rain
Blurry souls with no names
Fighting to survive

No one meets the eye
Drowning in the life
That passes them by

Chorus
Live your life
The one you live
Is what defines
In the darkness
Of this life
Always shine
<Repeat: 1x>

Verse
Waste it away
Facing another day
Without a fight

Shadows in the dark
Bend the flame but lose the spark
Waiting for the light

Chorus
Live your life
The one you live
Is what defines
In the darkness
Of this life
Always shine
<Repeat: 1x>

Verse
Hold on just a little more
The light is coming to keep you
Safe from harm

Here in the darkness
Where life sometimes
Goes wrong

Chorus
Live your life
The one you live
Is what defines
In the darkness
Of this life
Always shine
<Repeat: 1x>

<Musical Bridge/Outro>

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