i really like the drum work (particularly cymbals) and the clean guitar. i think, though, that this sort of song should have a hotter distortion on the guitars for the heavy parts... the guitar sounds sort of like 1976 joe perry playing 2001 metallica, know what i mean? the song itself is good and the mix is good too... it sounds kind of muddy but i think that's just the MP3 encoding. i noticed that there isn't much as far as stereo spread.... everything's in the middle... is this intentional or is it due to the mp3 encoding or what? if it's what you're going for, it's cool... personally i like the music sort of surround me... but that's a "too each his own" sort of thing...
i'm sure the original WAV file sounds way better.