this is NOT a chris harris song....

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I"m with CyanJaguar on this. I think it's a great basic song. Sure it's not finished, but you said that when you posted it. So I'm not gonna comment on the mix 'cause I don't think there's any point in that. Yes it's a good tune and yes you should continue working on it.
 
damn man,that chick must have broke your heart.I thought you were gonna cry at one point in the song.

Sure it's a keeper.Lay it all out and get it structured the way you think it should be and start tracking it for real.
 
Mr. Bucket:

I'm no expert, but it seems to me like this song should have drums...and a bass guitar...and more regular guitar...and some other stuff that I can't think of right now.

Seems a tad thin. If this was on a CD I was buying, I'd want some money back...not ALL of it mind you, but at least half. Sounds kinda' half-assed, so I'd expect at least a 50% rebate.

Also, as for the song itself...I couldn't really listen much because I was distracted by the half-assed nature of the recording...which was pretty half-assed...and needs more stuff.

I didn't read what you wrote when you posted this, because I don't care to read very much, but I love to give advice. My advice with this tune is that it needs stuff in it...like drums and bass and more regular guitar and maybe some reverb and stuff.

Sonically yours,
chris (the FULL ass)

I have to get on a plane right now, so ya'll don't write anything bad about me until at least Friday...

-bye-bye
 
Worth pursuing? Hell yeah.

I love the 'fourteen or twenty beers' line. Didn't like the way it was staggered the second time however.

I would definitely do it "for real."
 
chrisharris said:
Mr. Bucket:

I'm no expert, but it seems to me like this song should have drums...and a bass guitar...and more regular guitar...and some other stuff that I can't think of right now.

Seems a tad thin. If this was on a CD I was buying, I'd want some money back...not ALL of it mind you, but at least half. Sounds kinda' half-assed, so I'd expect at least a 50% rebate.

Also, as for the song itself...I couldn't really listen much because I was distracted by the half-assed nature of the recording...which was pretty half-assed...and needs more stuff.

I didn't read what you wrote when you posted this, because I don't care to read very much, but I love to give advice. My advice with this tune is that it needs stuff in it...like drums and bass and more regular guitar and maybe some reverb and stuff.

Sonically yours,
chris (the FULL ass)

I have to get on a plane right now, so ya'll don't write anything bad about me until at least Friday...

-bye-bye
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Stop being so tough on yourself,oops,I mean jamal.:eek:
 
I'm missing some inside jokes here I think...but the song is kewl. I liked the chorus mucho. your demos sound better than my finished products...that I won't ever post.
 
nice tune..


The guitar was crackling a bit, especially at the beginning.. I was left feeling a little left, but the melody and lyrics were good..
 
So...does the thumbs down mean you liked it? (seems like a dumb question, but your post wasn't bad)
 
i liked the tune............contrary to what some folks have said, i don't think this necesarily needs full band treatment........it would sound cool w/ a full band, but it already sounds pretty good, if you do keep it more low key, though, i would suggest that you figure out a way to give it a more full sound, perhaps stereo micing the main rhythm or something like that........
 
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