Please Critic My Song

[The First Don]

Heres a couple of songs I wrote. I like RS 4.1, but I don't think that anyone else does. Alot of people seem to like SDFO. I apologize that the songs don't have lyrics and that drums are programmed on a drum machine. I can neither sing nor drum. If you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/hambergmusic.htm

 

[talgreg]

I didn't like RS 4.1. I think it was repeating over and over. SDFO was better but tended to do the same in many parts, however the first 1--15 seconds of the song I liked because it was soothing at first, took me somewhere, the rest of the song took me somewhere I didn't want to be. But keep plugging away and don't give up. I've had people tell me my songs were crap but I keep trying. Anyway, I did listen to them. PS, The drum machine is ok, don't worry about that.

Thanks


Greg

 

[true-eurt]

I did like both of your songs..I think you have a gift...sure it needs some perfecting....but whom of us does not...And having to be songwriter,musician,sound-engineer,that really takes serious intentions.I commend you for that..A lot of hard,frustrating work too.. voted you hot on soundclick...most of the songs have crappy 'sound'..but yours was a lot better ..what did you use..mics and such? And I liked RS 4 1 the best..yeah.. lot of repetition..???....repetition........................repe...ti..tion..........
Geeeeeze, I thought that was what a song was..a bunch of repetitious modified noise... But who am I to critic?..A self-taught-self-fired-vocalist-no -clue-to-what -I-am-doing-geetarist-of-the-deepest-fantasies-of-my-mind..(be thankful they are not in YOUR mind)..I can play 'Chopstiks' on the drums ... Anyway,I look forward to hearing of your success story..Just don't let it take you from the 'Heart' of your music...Keep an individuality of your own..Even if it is your 'Repetitiousness'.. God bless..eurt...

 

[The First Don]

I used a Boss BR-532 4-track, and direct input with a Digitech RP-12. A fender guitar, and a ibanez bass (RS 4.1 i used the on board digital bass effect with my fender cause I didn't have my bass with me.) The drums are the on board drum machine of the boss. I used soundforge to transfer the music from my 4 track to mp3 files.

 

[true-eurt]

I used a Boss BR-532 4-track, and direct input with a Digitech RP-12. A fender guitar, and a ibanez bass (RS 4.1 i used the on board digital bass effect with my fender cause I didn't have my bass with me.) The drums are the on board drum machine of the boss. I used soundforge to transfer the music from my 4 track to mp3 files.

Hey thanks for the info...keep on rockin..

 

[React]

WEll i think people should be totally honest when they talk about other peoples music whenever i ask someone to critique i ask them FOr an HONEST opinion i ask people i dont know.. people i do know.. and people i sorta know... this way i get opinions from different people and from people that listen to differnt music will prolly give you a different answer..... ASk them to Be honest.. cuz its hard for some people to be mean