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Phyl said:My, my Monkey, what a big F hole you have!
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Phyl said:My, my Monkey, what a big F hole you have!
RAMI said:Damn, I think 3 of us posted at the same time....I hope my post above doesn't go un-noticed.
Supercreep said:Monkey - what do you say?
Timothy Lawler said:My reasoning re the vinyl sound... the piano and vocal are so detailed and clear that a connection with a scratchy record player just doesn't make sense to me. For a mysterious backing sound effect that didn't give a conflicting "listening situation" image (at least to me), maybe rain on the roof or something similar could work.
Tim
cominginsecond said:Good song. Your vocals kind of remind me of Dennis Wilson.
Definitely ax the record sound.
Supercreep said:Nice. Thanks Tim. That is a GREAT idea.
Incanus - what was that band with the sound we were after? I can't remember the name. Sparse and tense, it were.
Timothy Lawler said:My reasoning re the vinyl sound... the piano and vocal are so detailed and clear that a connection with a scratchy record player just doesn't make sense to me. For a mysterious backing sound effect that didn't give a conflicting "listening situation" image (at least to me), maybe rain on the roof or something similar could work.
Tim
RAMI said:I didn't comment on the scratching. I think that it should be left up to the artist. Of course, if it was too loud and distracting, that would be an issue worth commenting on. But if you guys feel it adds to the mood and feel that YOU are going for, it doesn't matter what 10 people out of the 4 billion on this earth say.
Having said that, my vote would be to start the song with it and slowly fade it away barely noticeably so that by halfway through the tune, we barely even notice it went away. But again, that's how I would do it. It doesn't really matter. It's your song and it's an awesome tune with or without it.
Well, in reality, concensus is, you dudes write some great tunes, and perform them well. Posting them here, for us to critique is just that....a critique. We pick at the stuff WE might do differently, but IT IS YOUR TUNE. You need to be happy with it. If we make all the changes, then it might not be what you want anymore. It would be our tune. I listen to every comment made about my music, and at least try most suggestions that sound reasonable. Some of it really helps the music, and some doesn't. But, all is good, cuz if I didn't try new stuff, I wouldn't learn.Incanus said:See, I read your post!! I always shall.
I agree completely with the first part of the post. It is ours to do with as we see fit. And I really enjoy creating the music we're currently doing, even if it is not the 'flavour of the day' stylistically.
I'm not sure about the second part, because if the song began that way, wouldn't it be missed at the end, or during the stops? I think it's an all or none thing, but maybe we could put it in a little lower.
That little sound sure has sparked a lot of input and ideas! Kind of funny.
Thanks to everyone for listening and posting.
Oh Yeah.......MONKEY RULEZ!!!!!!!!MONKEY! said:A note from Monkey's private secretary:
Monkey's comments on the arrangement and editing issues raised translate approximately as, "Tim is a poo-poo ca-ca face".
Dogman said:Well, in reality, concensus is, you dudes write some great tunes, and perform them well. Posting them here, for us to critique is just that....a critique. We pick at the stuff WE might do differently, but IT IS YOUR TUNE. You need to be happy with it. If we make all the changes, then it might not be what you want anymore. It would be our tune. I listen to every comment made about my music, and at least try most suggestions that sound reasonable. Some of it really helps the music, and some doesn't. But, all is good, cuz if I didn't try new stuff, I wouldn't learn.
Your stuff is not "the flavor of the day", as most stuff on here isn't. That's what makes homerecording so cool. There is no way a record label would even try to put out a song I do......It wouldn't sell, so not worth the time. They run it as a business, and need that daily flavor to operate. I do it for fun. I'm sure you guys have some fun with your tunes, as most home musicians do, and that is the most important aspect.
Disclaimer:
Rant is not certifide correct by anyone, and no mind was harmed, or used in this rant. If rant is too bad, don't read. Ranter is drunk. So what else is new? Ranter may be full of shit......he did just eat Mexican food......
Nakatira said:Truly an amazing song, one of the best I`ve heard on this forum.
outstanding vox, beautifull sound.
I also get a 70`s vibe from this song and I love 70`s music.
your`e defenitly talented.
Hats of
taking a bow.![]()