
lga5824
It's Just My Opinion
Thanks Chris, for the listen and for responding. I am so glad you liked it and appreciate your feedback!
My friend Gekko - You certainly seemed to put some thought into your response and that says a lot. To me it tells me you definitely want to provide detailed feedback and you seem to care about breaking things down for the artist. That's much appreciated. It's interesting you commented on the ending - I actually had a soft ending where it ended instrumentally without the big chorus and fade out. My musician friends (every one, actually) said they heard a bigger ending and thought I should fade out. When I changed the ending, I actually agreed with them and liked it better. But I was on the exact same track as you at first.
I'm not hearing the strange stuff on the vocal consonants as you stated, but that doesn't mean they don't exist. Maybe it's coming through on your sound better than mine. I didn't do any section fixes in the song vocally, so not sure what that would be. I did use the gate and compressed the vocals, however.
I'm not planning on shopping this song (it's really for me at this point - and to find out what style I really want to sing - not sure this is it either), although I suspect if someone is truly interested in it, it would be redone altogether someday anyway.
Thanks so much for your detailed listen and comprehensive feedback. Always appreciated!
Jen
My friend Gekko - You certainly seemed to put some thought into your response and that says a lot. To me it tells me you definitely want to provide detailed feedback and you seem to care about breaking things down for the artist. That's much appreciated. It's interesting you commented on the ending - I actually had a soft ending where it ended instrumentally without the big chorus and fade out. My musician friends (every one, actually) said they heard a bigger ending and thought I should fade out. When I changed the ending, I actually agreed with them and liked it better. But I was on the exact same track as you at first.
I'm not hearing the strange stuff on the vocal consonants as you stated, but that doesn't mean they don't exist. Maybe it's coming through on your sound better than mine. I didn't do any section fixes in the song vocally, so not sure what that would be. I did use the gate and compressed the vocals, however.
I'm not planning on shopping this song (it's really for me at this point - and to find out what style I really want to sing - not sure this is it either), although I suspect if someone is truly interested in it, it would be redone altogether someday anyway.
Thanks so much for your detailed listen and comprehensive feedback. Always appreciated!
Jen