AaronChapman
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This is a song I wrote a while back, I'm seeking some feedback and some insight to what needs to be improved.
Here's the lyrics:
If I dare to fly away,
Grab my hand,
I'll lift your weight.
Together we'll escape the day.
If you are enthralled
By the siren's call,
Listen to my music;
The curtain calls.
Don't be so small.
Don't be so small.
If you feel left behind,
Stay by my side
There's a future to find.
And If I'm gone,
When failure calls,
Follow my string.
I'll Show you the way.
You're stranded
In the echo of time.
Don't you cry,
I'll give you a free ride.
Stay by my side,
There's a future to find.
https://soundcloud.com/aaron-chap/futuredemo
Here's the lyrics:
If I dare to fly away,
Grab my hand,
I'll lift your weight.
Together we'll escape the day.
If you are enthralled
By the siren's call,
Listen to my music;
The curtain calls.
Don't be so small.
Don't be so small.
If you feel left behind,
Stay by my side
There's a future to find.
And If I'm gone,
When failure calls,
Follow my string.
I'll Show you the way.
You're stranded
In the echo of time.
Don't you cry,
I'll give you a free ride.
Stay by my side,
There's a future to find.
https://soundcloud.com/aaron-chap/futuredemo