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[CanopuS]

Well, I apologise, I'm posting way too frequently, but thats what happens when you suddenly lose your writers block This song's *ACOUSTIC ONLY* (I've given up on using voice until I get a better setup), I hope you like it:

Cheers

 

[joro]

high end is clear man...
low end is muddy...lot's of finger noise...
there is static too...cord noise maybe...

seems a little repetative and the timing is a little clumsy...
could use a change up along the way...might be a good intro or outro to a tune...

keep on pickin' man..
Joe

 

[CanopuS]

Well in terms of what sound quality I can get, its hard to improve too much, I don't have the best signal chain

The timing may seem off because:

a) I decided to use an interesting beat which involved a double triplet to shake things up
b) not all guitar parts are playing at the same time, on and off
c) I did just mess up

It is repetative thats true, the vocal line has been put onto guitar, and it doesn't exactly stand out. Might just sound like a load of chords for that reason.

Thanks for the feedback

 

[Paco]

First off, congrats on losing the writer's block. Keep playing!

Wow - I liked the song a lot. Actually I loved it - didn't sound clumsy to me (except for one spot at 33 seconds - you could patch in to fix that one spot?). Perfect length for the song. I dig the triplets and stuff. I'm mainly a guitarist myself, and have been playing guitar for many years. Your emotion comes out well through your fingers.

It may not be recorded as hifi as some other people's stuff, but I actually think the relative lofi works better on this one anyway. Kind of makes the guitar sound like a harpsichord. GO AHEAD, MOZART! I could see this on a professional album as a "cool" or "retro" sound or something.

I listened to it a bunch of times. I want more!

 

[CanopuS]

Hey, thanks a lot man! You're right, there is a slip, I'll get rid of that. Thanks for the kind words