what do these mean to you?

[kindofblue]

you say you'd never leave this place alive
yet i know
you'll be the one saying bye
you never said a word to me
about your friends
and i confide and you can see

im rising above this place i know of
im trying so hard
to reach your mind
and leave this place like you

ive always known
id be the one to fail you
you've watched me die
a million times, a millions ways
lost in me i never see
the point across
or come to be

im rising above this place i know of
im trying so hard
to reach your mind
and leave this place i knew

im rising above this place i know of
im trying so hard
to reach your mind
and leave this place
im rising above

 

[Rokket]

Damn!

The words stand alone without music, and there is definitely a dark feel to them. I'd like to hear the music. Post it in the mp3 clinic when you get something. I hear acoustic guitars, what were you going for?

 

[kindofblue]

i'll post it, i gotta record a working copy of it..within a few days.

 

[Rokket]

I'll be looking for it! Nice job on the lyrics!