New Original Tune: Robot Hero (Alternative/Pop Punk)

[Flyguitarfish]

Here’s a new one to check out. Any mixing help would be appreciated. The low end is giving me a hard time. Drums too bright? Dense mix, so hard to understand the lyrics at times?

Thank you!

Robot Hero

Sunsets are nice
I wanna be your hero
Your X’s an O’s
My 1’s and 0’s

I might be faster than you
But this is all I can do
PS don’t leave me out in the rain

I’d fly away
But they won’t let me on an airplane
It’s my holiday
Not this time but every other weekend

I might be faster than you
But this is all I can do
PS don’t leave me out in the rain

I do what I do, and I don’t need to sleep
Just plug me in, And fuses are cheap
If I’m counting I’d be your number 5
Shorting all the circuits but I’m kind of alive

It’s my Holiday
I wanna be your hero
It’s my holiday

 

[Flyguitarfish]

Fixed the lyrics:

Robot Hero

Sunsets are nice
I wanna be your hero
Your X’s an O’s
Together with my 1’s and 0’s

I might be faster than you
But this is all I can do
P.S. don’t leave me out in the rain

I’d fly away
But they won’t let me on an airplane
It’s my holiday
Not this time but every other weekend

I might be faster than you
But this is all I can do
P.S. don’t leave me out in the rain

Don’t make a mistake, don’t let the show stop
Just doing my best to be a robot
I do what I do, and I don’t need to sleep
Just plug me in, and fuses are cheap
And if I’m counting I’d be your number 5
Shorting all the circuits but I’m kind of alive

It’s my holiday
I wanna be your hero
It’s my holiday
Your X’s and O’s
I wanna be your hero

 

[Flyguitarfish]

Better mix…I think: