Kelly Holdrige - thanks a lot! I tried to apply your suggestion of something else going through besides guitar, if you feel like hearing it again, that would be cool... if not, thanks for your tips.

I cant speed up the drums without redoing the whole thing because I played the drums live on an electric drumset.. I didn't/don't record with midi because I am an idiot.. I would have been able to speed it up..
GT - thanks man, I wasnt sure if anyone would get it... Always a pleasure to hear your tunes as well...
rats - you hated it!

cool response

The reasons why I did this tune are 1 - for a girl (I'm sure it won't help) 2 - I really do like the original melody. 3 - I'm not very good and it was easy to play, 4 - I'm an idiot, 5 - It was in my limited vocal range.

I'm not too familiar with the butthole surfers, but I appreciate the words... After hearing your tunes, I hear where your coming from... maybe you can check out the new version and see if its any better... if not , thanks again dude..
Guernica -

great response! Yeah, if you don't like the original you will certainly want to vomit on this.. I tried to keep certain parts the same..

thanks for the feedback, and check out the new version..........if you want to vomit again..
VOXVENDOR - thanks for checkin it out man.. I got a new vocal processor and I can't help but abuse the vocal effects.. I'm really trying to lean off but it isn't easy when you have a voice like mine.. it was on purpose for this one, but I kind of think I over did it.. I added the keyboards and solos and hopefully you'll check it out to see if it's any better... thanks again dude

My friends totally ranked on me when I played them this tune!

Screw em, I love the original melody!!