Isn't It lonely (Mix/song thoughts)

[packrobottom]

Pretty close on this one just need some vocals on the outro and breakdown after second course
I'm thinking maybe I need to resing the verses are they a bit thin/breathy sounding?

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Lyrics:
Isn’t it lonely
[Verse one]
You didn’t think about the price you have to pay
I don’t think you understand
New tears and smiles sprout a vice grip in our way
Don’t blink the mess is out of hand

[Chorus]
I don’t care what the preachers say
the end of the worlds just another day
When it’s lonely yah isn’t it lonely

[Verse two]
We never talk about the lines drawn in the sand
Those thoughts, fell on sword in hand
Forever block it out the time worn futile plan
Slow walk the war, too old to stand

[Chorus]
I don’t care what the preachers say
The end of the worlds just another day
When It’s lonely yah it’s lonely
Right on track as a matter of fact
Waiting for the dust lying flat on your back
Gets lonely yah isn’t it lonely

I’m so tired of always floating
I’m so high above the ground
Aren’t you tired of being angry
Aren’t you tired of feeling down

[Chorus]
I don’t care what the preachers say
The end of the worlds just another day
When It’s lonely yah baby it’s lonely
Right on track as a matter of fact
Waiting for the dust lying flat on your back
Gets Lonely yah isn’t it lonely

 

[TripleM]

Generally I thought it sounded good.

Great harmonies.

I little too much reverb for me on the lead vocal and rhythm guitars.

The guitars are competing a little too much with the vocal. Just a bit.

The bass is covering the kick. Again, just a bit.

All of this is minor stuff. It sounded really good.

 

[packrobottom]

Generally I thought it sounded good.

Great harmonies.

I little too much reverb for me on the lead vocal and rhythm guitars.

The guitars are competing a little too much with the vocal. Just a bit.

The bass is covering the kick. Again, just a bit.

All of this is minor stuff. It sounded really good.

Thanks Triple
Cut a bit of low end from bass. Removed a bunch of verb that had stacked up on bgvs and a tad from gtrs.

 

[JAPOV]

Luv the tone of the drumz!

 

[Track Rat]

Drums sound great. Sounds like Neve Pre.s. Pro production. catchy tune. I give it a 73. That's an old joke.....

 

[packrobottom]

Thanks guys. I'm gonna resing verses they sound too thin and breathy