Pyroclastic Flow

[VesuviusJay]

Hey guys, Here's an instrumental I've been playing with. Again I realize there are performance issues here, but again, these are just practice mix downs! I'm really shooting to fatten up the drums here BTW! So any suggestions you may have would be tremendously helpfull!

Thanks!!

Jay

http://www.nowhereradio.com/vesuvius/singles

Pyroclastic Flow

 

[Wireneck]

jay,

i listened on lo-fi so i can't really make comments about the recording.
Sounds like you got some nice ideas with the riffs and drums. The lead guitar gets old really fast. Is that one string for almost half the solo? I don't want to knock your playing but to solo over the entire thing you may want to really work on your lead chops. Sounds like your spinning circles in a few places. Anyhow you said it wasn't final or anything so maybe take that in to consideration. Just my opinion.

 

[groovejunkie]

hard tune..

you should post at least a 128kbps tune, cos it's hard to say something about the mix -
3:55 very surprising change -IMO it should come earlier
one weak thing - couldn't understand a word from the lyrics, but I think that's the intention?

i liked it though
cheers

 

[VesuviusJay]

Here Bro Ill post the lyrics for you!

Behold now this dark day,
Judgement day is here.
Growls or madness deep in the earth,
Animals cower in fear.

Unsuspecting victims fate,
Prophesy of death,
Exhumed centuries later,
my devistating breath.

Behold now my ash black sun,
Join the mass demise.
In minutes day becomes night,
right before your eyes.
Mortal fools there's no escape,
There is nowhere to run,
Atmospheric blanket of death,
Behold this ash black sun.

Suffocating airbourne debris,
saturates the sky,
asphixiates life in its tracks,
its your turn to die.

Flatline on the horizon,
taunts your every step.
Ash is raining in your ears,
this prophesy is kept...

Now listen again, you should be able to follow along.

 

[VesuviusJay]

Come on guys gimme some feeback on this one will ya!