Pistol Playing With Satan (I went off like Pac on this one

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I really like the composition of the song. There sounds like some clipping across the board from the kick and the vocals need to be brought out a little (brighter or louder?). Can't really hear all of the words.
 
what should i do I really love my lryics from the song it has to be one of my best. I really wanna have pple hear me on this one plse let me know what i might need to do.
 
I agree with the above poster, you need to do something about the clipping. The vocals didn't sound right to me and couldn't tell why...but after thinking about it, I'm not sure if the way you're rapping goes with the beat you have. But that's just a guess. I think it needs a better end too, stopped too abruptly imo.
But overall you got a cool song there and I did like it. Just trying to give you some feedback :)
 
I think you have outgrown your equipment. That means you are trying to do more than your equipment is capable of. So, you've got to get new equipment... condenser mic, preamp, new drum program (maybe), multitrack or DAW of your choice and so on.

I came back to edit this to say... you don't have to get a condenser mic. At least get a Shure SM58 or SM58S or some other equally great cardoid mic (which I haven't heard of in the SM58 price range).
 
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