OK here goes! In case anyone is confused, this isn't official judging, that only comes after the deadline (if there is one) has passed. These are hopefully helpful comments you can use to make your final version better

so these might sound harsh, but have *zero* bearing on actual judging
Listening backwards:
gitRhero: Bring the low end, especially bass, under control. Guitars could be more prominent in places.
Perdicament: Tinny. Add some balls, and you'll be close.
Keiffer: Nice. Good imaging, good balance. Maybe the drums could be . . . not wider, it almost sounds like they have a stereo effect on them, but more natural panning. Try to control the bass a little more.
NL5: Good guitars. Vocals I can't decide if they are too prominent.
timboz: Sounds dark and distorted, and pumping pretty bad Sorry
Dogman: Interesting. Sort of an '80s style metal mix with '00s music. It could work . . . cymbals sound unnatural, like there is too much high shelf boost or something. Kick is tubby. Contentrate on a classic melodic sound, see where it goes . . .
scypior: Sounds like a "telephone" intro that never opens up. Some interesting ideas on the vocal mix, needs better execution.
BentRabbit: Sorry dude, this sounds like the bass player's cue mix
bigwillz24: see above, except it's the drummer's cue mix
