Mammon (Count It) - Looking for feedback on composition and mix

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I got some Pink Floyd presets for Guitar Rig and this is the result after jamming for a while.

The track is inspired by Pink Floyds "Money".

Disclaimer! The vocals is currently AI. It's how I work since I can sing myself. I Use a combination of both guitar to create the melody and/or my own horrible voice and then change that to AI so I can get a feel of how it'll actually sound with a good singer. It works great as a blueprint to use when getting a singer to actually record it later on. It's still composed by me and no AI will be included in the final result.

Everything except the vocals is 100% non-AI.

I would love some feedback mainly on the composition since vocals will be changed later on, but would also love some thoughts on the mix on the instruments. I want it to sound 70s. Does the track get boring? Does the sound effects of coins, bills and the wall street crowd work or is it to much? Any tips on how I can improve it?

Here's the lyrics:

[VERSE 1]

Another zero, keep 'em coming
Grab every green you can
another handshake, another deal
Doesn't matter who gets burned

Hey Mammon, tell me what I'm worth
My heaven's here on earth
Ain't nothing can't be sold
Trade my soul for a stack of cash

[CHORUS]
COUNT IT!
Count it till your fingers bleed
COUNT IT!
Count it like it's all you need
STACK IT!
Stack it higher watch it grow
STACK IT!
Stack it watch the money flow

[VERSE 2]

The gates of heaven don't take gold
Can't bribe that final door
Another dollar, another dime
Fill my soul with borrowed time

Hey Mammon, tell me what's your price
What will you take from me?
Fat cats watch that dollar sign
Until there's nothing left to count

[CHORUS]
COUNT IT!
Count it till your fingers bleed
COUNT IT!
Count it like it's all you need
STACK IT!
Stack it higher watch it grow
STACK IT!
Stack it watch the money flow
 

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