
miroslav
Cosmic Cowboy
Take his "mastered" version and just lower the output level so it's the same as your original...and there not much difference, maybe a pinch more brightness, otherwise, nothing else.
Now if that's all you needed/wanted...but I bet a real mastering engineer could do much more for you than just punch up the volume like that (WAY TO MUCH I might add)…and flat-top everything.
He actually made the song annoying to listen to, IMHO.
That song doesn’t need to be IN YOUR FACE!!!!
I think you're song has some things you could correct with simple remixing...before you even consider any volume boosts or any other "mastering".
Lower the level of the acoustic a bit...and then either just pan it more to one side, out of the way of the vocal, or...since you have nothing else but drums and vocals, consider splitting it into two tracks and panning it with a touch of delay on one side, or redoing the acoustic as a true stereo track...so that you can have it fill out left and right, while opening up the middle for the vocals.
Also...those drums are lame.
I know it's just a simple electronic beat...but maybe tune it in with some more beef, and throw in something more than just the basic beat...a few accents, a roll.
Now...if you add a bass guitar...I think you would have a nice mix going!
It's a good tune...it has a Beatlesque vibe at the change-up.
Now if that's all you needed/wanted...but I bet a real mastering engineer could do much more for you than just punch up the volume like that (WAY TO MUCH I might add)…and flat-top everything.
He actually made the song annoying to listen to, IMHO.
That song doesn’t need to be IN YOUR FACE!!!!

I think you're song has some things you could correct with simple remixing...before you even consider any volume boosts or any other "mastering".
Lower the level of the acoustic a bit...and then either just pan it more to one side, out of the way of the vocal, or...since you have nothing else but drums and vocals, consider splitting it into two tracks and panning it with a touch of delay on one side, or redoing the acoustic as a true stereo track...so that you can have it fill out left and right, while opening up the middle for the vocals.
Also...those drums are lame.

I know it's just a simple electronic beat...but maybe tune it in with some more beef, and throw in something more than just the basic beat...a few accents, a roll.
Now...if you add a bass guitar...I think you would have a nice mix going!
It's a good tune...it has a Beatlesque vibe at the change-up.