Hit song Forumal

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Here are the lyrics to another hit song:

I can't get no satisfaction
I try
And I try
And I try
And I try
But I can't get no
No, no, no

I think a big part of the debate that goes on in this forum comes about because people are comparing dissimilar genres. The things that are important to a successful country or R&B tune are pretty different from the things that make a great trance tune.

Generally when you talk "songwriting" and the "rules of songwriting", you are speaking under the umbrella of country, R&B, and pop. The things that make those songs great are lyrical content, concise song form, and killer hooks. When I dispense songwriting advice, it's usually from that point of view. When you read songwriting books or go to workshops it usually from that point of view. Most independant songwriters ascribe to those principles when creating and evaluating songs.

On the other hand, if you write heavy metal song, a killer guitar riff might trump lyrical content in importance. If you're writing a dance tune, groove and production might trump everything else.

There is, however, a lot of songwriting skill that can apply to all genres; things like prosody and alliteration. Things like melody constuction, hook building, rhyme, and metaphor. An understanding of those things is valuable to any songwriter.

As far as "hit" songs go, I have this opinion: a "hit" is never necessarily a well-written song. I can name a lot of "hit" songs that really suck. On the flip side, a "hit" song is also never necessarily a commercialized piece of crap. I can name a lot of "hit" songs that are frickin' brilliant. There are tons of brilliant songs out there that will never be heard by more than a handful of people, and there is a lot of schlock out there that will make the charts. All things being equal, at the end of the day I think a songwriter that writes consistantly great tunes has a better chance of getting a "hit" than someone writing skill-less songs.

Of course, all things are never equal, are they?

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glynb said:
Well done, i agree with your approach, & I do the same agonising over every line. But then I haven't had any 'Hits', you don't state whether you have had any either? This post is about formulas for 'Hit' songs, not 'good' songs or 'worhtwhile' songs with meaningful lyrics. Hit songs and good songs aren't necessarily the same thing, though to a record label which exists only to sell product they probably are.

Hit song :

My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like it's better than yours,
Damn right, it's better than your's,
I could teach you, but I have to charge

Oh, once you get involved,
Everyone will look this way so,
You must maintain your charm,
Same time maintain your halo,
Just get the perfect blend,
Plus what you have within,
Then next his eyes will squint,
Then he's picked up your scent.

Now, i don't know how much the author agonised over those lyrics, perfecting them? Point is, that was a smash hit song, hits aren't necessarily about time spent or cleverness, but a groove or a good tune, there's no formula.

Formulas if followed correctly will work every time, there is no hit song formula becuase nothing works every time does it?


What song is this? I've never heard it. And who says that "formulas with work every time" ... ? I guess you've never heard of chaos theory.
 
Here is a hit song.......

I became a member...
A member.....
I became a member....
A member......
A member....of Homerecording...BBS...da da da da.....
By True-Eurt....................... :D
 
glynb said:
Well done, i agree with your approach, & I do the same agonising over every line. But then I haven't had any 'Hits', you don't state whether you have had any either? This post is about formulas for 'Hit' songs, not 'good' songs or 'worhtwhile' songs with meaningful lyrics. Hit songs and good songs aren't necessarily the same thing, though to a record label which exists only to sell product they probably are.

Hit song :

My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like it's better than yours,
Damn right, it's better than your's,
I could teach you, but I have to charge

Oh, once you get involved,
Everyone will look this way so,
You must maintain your charm,
Same time maintain your halo,
Just get the perfect blend,
Plus what you have within,
Then next his eyes will squint,
Then he's picked up your scent.

Now, i don't know how much the author agonised over those lyrics, perfecting them? Point is, that was a smash hit song, hits aren't necessarily about time spent or cleverness, but a groove or a good tune, there's no formula.

Formulas if followed correctly will work every time, there is no hit song formula becuase nothing works every time does it?

I dont think ive heard this song but I recognize the style..is that missy?
 
glynb said:
Is there a formula for a famous painting?
Sure, get some brushes some paint and a canvass and paint the canvass with the brushes and paint.
Is there a formula for a hit novel? Sure, get a word processor, write a story with a plot, beginning middle and end and some interesting characters and there you have it, a hit novel. Simple.

See how silly this whole thing is. Let's stop it now.

Without promotion you have no hit. Promotion determines hits above all.

Promoters do not write songs. Why would you post this in songwriting forum? This makes no sense.
 
true-eurt said:
Here is a hit song.......

I became a member...
A member.....
I became a member....
A member......
A member....of Homerecording...BBS...da da da da.....
By True-Eurt....................... :D

That's HOT!!! When does that single drop? I gots to get that!!! The "da da da da" part is what really sells it. Nice. :p
 
scrubs said:
That's HOT!!! When does that single drop? I gots to get that!!! The "da da da da" part is what really sells it. Nice. :p
Maybe we should collab on this one too, huh? I can hear it with your voice in my head as we speak. I've got a groovy bass line for it... :D
 
Rokket said:
Maybe we should collab on this one too, huh? I can hear it with your voice in my head as we speak. I've got a groovy bass line for it... :D

Holy crap, you have two glowing chicklets now! You are a god among men and truly "a spledid one to behold." Me, I'm "just really nice." :D

As for the collab, absolutely! Maybe a little Bootsy Collins funky bass, and I'll just lay my flow over that! ;)
 
true-eurt said:
Here is a hit song.......

I became a member...
A member.....
I became a member....
A member......
A member....of Homerecording...BBS...da da da da.....
By True-Eurt....................... :D

That is freakin awesome. How did you do that!?
 
scrubs said:
That's HOT!!! When does that single drop? I gots to get that!!! The "da da da da" part is what really sells it. Nice. :p

Thanks scrubs...the da da da da part was a hard decision...almost put yeah-yeah-yeah.....Oh well , that'll be my next project.... :D Hey maybe we could colaborate..... :p
oops...I see there is some of that already going on.....so what now?.......... a three-way split?..... :D
 
FALKEN said:
Promoters do not write songs. Why would you post this in songwriting forum? This makes no sense.

You miss my point.
promotion determines whether a song becomes a 'hit'. This is a songwriters forum, to assist people to write better songs. This forum advice won't determine whether anyone here has a 'hit', that's down to promotion and media exposure.

The poster asked if there was a formula for a 'hit' song. The term formula suggests that if you follow the formula you'll get predictable results - follow the formula and you'll have a hit. Well there isn't a formula for a hit, not really is there?

Hopefully, this forum is to help us all write good songs, in whatever genre we specialise, but hits are something determined by factors outside our control.

Take business, is there a formula to have a succesfull business? No, in that you can't guarantee if you do X,Y and Z that your business will be succesfull. Doesn't work like that. On the other hand you can guarantee that unless you do certain things your business will definitely fail.

With songwroting i gueess you can do X, Y and Z and end up with a good song, but that won't make it a hit, without promotion, blah blah.
 
Look,... I'm sorry. Laugh all you want, but...

"Shake Your Booty" was a bigger hit than anyone on this board has or ever will write or produce. :eek:
 
A Reel Person said:
"Shake Your Booty" was a bigger hit than anyone on this board has or ever will write or produce. :eek:

So was "I'm too sexy."

That makes me want to almost quit.
 
There are plenty of "hit" songs and plenty of "great" songs, but there are few "great hit" songs.

The trick to a hit song it seems is to make the listener feel something without thinking about it. Don't make people have to work to be entertianed.

As far as the formula there is a web site that claims to have software that will tell you if your song is a hit.

Will a formula work for everyone? Well Stephen King or John Grisham seem to have a formula that works for selling books. John Grisham's books for the most part are about southern lawyers who dig up (or have) a dirty secret, try to expose the answers and then run around not trying to get caught by the bad guys.

So if I follow that outline does that mean I can have a bestselling novel?
 
glynb said:
This is a songwriters forum, to assist people to write better songs. This forum advice won't determine whether anyone here has a 'hit', that's down to promotion and media exposure.

Hopefully, this forum is to help us all write good songs, in whatever genre we specialise, but hits are something determined by factors outside our control.

I see your point, but don't completely agree w/ it. For us indepndant songwriteres there is certainly a lot to having a hit that is beyond our control. However, by learning to write great songs we up our chances tremendously.

For example: Up until a few years ago I'd written hundreds of songs and never really had any success with any of them (and by success I mean made money or received any awards).

Then I made the concious decision to start writing country songs for two reasons: 1) I had a knack for it, and 2) it's one of the few markets where an independant songwriter stands any chance (however small it may be) of making any money. I began really studying the genre, reading A LOT of books about songwriting, writing every single day, and learning the "Rules" of songwriting.

Since that time I have won two songwriting awards and published 3 songs in Nashville. Two of my songs are currently on Brian Gallimore's desk for consideration on Tim McGraw's next album. I still have not received a dime, but I'm a heck of a lot closer than I've ever been becuase I am "playing the game". I still write a lot of stuff just for fun, but I concentrate on country follow that "formula" to increase my chances of a hit.

Wether or not I ever get a cut, or even more unlikely a hit, is beyond my control to some extent. But I also think that we all make our own luck.

A
 
true-eurt said:
A bit of 'post-hacking' there .....eh Scrubs... :mad: oops , this isn't the mad thread? :D :p

In the songwriting forum, we call that "editing." You know, I was just trying to weed out the extraneous material and get to the core of your message. ;)
 
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