wilko said:
I am sorry here but I can't agree with the above. Logical thoughts play a large role in writing songs otherwise we'd end up with meaningless random garbage.
When I write a song, it is based around (usually) an emotion or an idea and I get that idea down on paper (well MR8 recorder). When I get the lyrics down - I analyse each line. I look at the rhyme, the meter even the hardness of the syllables. Each time I ask myself "Does this fit?", "Does this say what I want to say?", "Can I find a better word/line/note?" etc. In every case the song itself becomes better. A true songwriter knows how the rules work (and knows when to break the rules).
I have known songwriters never edit their work as they want to "keep the original vibe" and almost without exception their songs make me cringe at some point or another.
A good song is one to which you can relate on some level.
Wilko
It is cold in New Zelaand now...brrrr)
Well done, i agree with your approach, & I do the same agonising over every line. But then I haven't had any 'Hits', you don't state whether you have had any either? This post is about formulas for 'Hit' songs, not 'good' songs or 'worhtwhile' songs with meaningful lyrics. Hit songs and good songs aren't necessarily the same thing, though to a record label which exists only to sell product they probably are.
Hit song :
My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard,
And they're like it's better than yours,
Damn right, it's better than your's,
I could teach you, but I have to charge
Oh, once you get involved,
Everyone will look this way so,
You must maintain your charm,
Same time maintain your halo,
Just get the perfect blend,
Plus what you have within,
Then next his eyes will squint,
Then he's picked up your scent.
Now, i don't know how much the author agonised over those lyrics, perfecting them? Point is, that was a smash hit song, hits aren't necessarily about time spent or cleverness, but a groove or a good tune, there's no formula.
Formulas if followed correctly will work every time, there is no hit song formula becuase nothing works every time does it?