First Time letting others hear

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Hey guys, I have just written and recorded two instrumental songs. I have recorded before, but never submitted any songs for any reviews or criticism. I wrote the drum tracks in a MIDI Studio, and recorded every other part from guitar. The two songs are titled "Between You" and "Let It Go" by Greeneye. They are posted at LULU.com. Here is the link, should take you right to the two songs:

For "Between You": http://music.lulu.com/content/54823
For "Let It Go": http://music.lulu.com/content/54844

You will need to download them.
I would be very grateful for any criticisms, reviews, ideas, etc. Slam it if you want, I just want an honest idea of what others think of my music. Thanks a ton! Rock on All!
 
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You probably didn't get too many responses because...NOBODY wants to sign up for anything to DL your songs. I listened to the shortened mpg versions..to DL the whole song on that "lulu" site..you have to give your email and sign up. That aint gonna happen man!
Anyway...I can hear what your doing. I thought the effect of the guitar in the 2nd tune was cool...nice clean beginning too. I'd need to hear the full recording but it all seems recorded well. The drums sound good. I liked the sound of the drums on your 1st tune..nice snare...The distorted chorused guitar got to me after about 20 seconds. Kind of monotonous tone...only to be used sparingly. I can't comment on your songwriting...need to hear it all....Your pentatonic chops are limited. Keep practicing man!...ps...and find someplace for your songs where they can be DL w/o signing up!!
pss..I also did a tune w midi drums,midi keys..gtr and bass instrumental...check it out at
www.CharlieThomas.socrazy.com/Mp3s
click on Danny Diatonic
 
I am working on getting them up on Soundclick. I realized the problem with downloading them shortly after I posted this. Thanks for at least checking out the clips. And your feedback is really appreciated.
 
I am having problems with Soundclick. Can anyone recommend a site to post the MP3's for these two songs. My uploads to soundclick aren't sounding right, and some tracks are getting buried. My apologies for the whole LULU thing as well. I'm just trying to get these things heard so I can get an idea of where my music stands with other musicians. Thanks to everyone.
 
Well, thank you....

If anyone needs a song or two hosted, I can do it, no problem....I should have enough bandwidth pretty soon to handle just about anything. Hopefully, I will even have it set up so you can upload your own songs (instead of me doing it).
 
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