What do U think of my next beat?

[BRIEFCASEMANX]

it's got that nice 80's flavor. It's called "That's Truth".

edit: hold up, i'ma put up this louder version RIGHT quick.....done

 

[REEK BROCK]

I like those sounds man.It made my head nod.We might have to do a trade or something.

 

[Fieva]

Not bad. It's missing something though...can't place my finger on it but it is.

But overall a nice track.

Fiev.

 

[BRIEFCASEMANX]

for drums all i have is a kick and a snare right now, it's probably missing more percussion stuff, eh?

 

[Re-Lapse]

for drums all i have is a kick and a snare right now, it's probably missing more percussion stuff, eh?

give the Kick some FX, make it deeper, with a harder hit.

Tighten the snare up, and add a little reverb.

add a tight hi-hat combo

throw a clap in there somewhere, or a change of multiple snares to go into some other flow

maybe a light cymbal roll somewhere too

an open hi-hat on every few before the snare would be tight too

add a bassline to go with the melody

enhance the vocals, make them more up front, throw a couple more versus in there, and you got a hot one.

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[Fieva]

Now I know this is totally off the subject but WTF is with your signature Brief???

(The avatar signature is funny in a weird way...but the signature on the bottom doesn't help you strut like a man)

 

[BillyBo]

give the Kick some FX, make it deeper, with a harder hit.

Tighten the snare up, and add a little reverb.

add a tight hi-hat combo

throw a clap in there somewhere, or a change of multiple snares to go into some other flow

maybe a light cymbal roll somewhere too

an open hi-hat on every few before the snare would be tight too

add a bassline to go with the melody

enhance the vocals, make them more up front, throw a couple more versus in there, and you got a hot one.

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what he means is redo the whole freakin track and it might be good.

 

[Re-Lapse]

what he means is redo the whole freakin track and it might be good.

C'mon now, I didn't want him to re-do the whole track. Just.. Some... of ... it...

Nah, I just listed the changes I would have made to it, if I were working on it.

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[Jayarre]

Nice melodies, good beat!

 

[BillyBo]

C'mon now, I didn't want him to re-do the whole track. Just.. Some... of ... it...

Nah, I just listed the changes I would have made to it, if I were working on it.

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yeah, tweaking an otherwise lame beat can make all the difference.

for the record, i have not listened to this beat. feel free to disregard anything i've typed.

 

[Re-Lapse]

yeah, tweaking an otherwise lame beat can make all the difference.

for the record, i have not listened to this beat. feel free to disregard anything i've typed.

It's a good start, just needs some work.

Hence why I added my input

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