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n3wt
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Hi,
I've been lurking in this forum for a little bit now, checking things out and whatnot, and I decided it would be cool to post something of mine.
Recording quality wise, it's pretty weak, recorded straight through a single microphone as that's all I have going right now, I've been working on getting equipment and honing my recording skills, but I'm still fairly terrible.
The song is called Waltz for a Hollywood Backlot, a big consideration I had while I was writing it was an efficient use of language, I wanted it to be as simple as possible and for every line to be as meaningful as possible...whether or not I've achieved that remains to be seen
. Hopefully I've been able to frame a story but still leave a lot of room for your imagination to take it where you want it to go.
You and I in black and white
Glamour darling we're hollywood tonight
The Heroine has a secret she's too guarded to tell
Turns to leave as the orchestra swells
And if this is where we part ways
I'll remember you as you are today
And forever you'll stay in my mind
A beauty that need never surrender to time
Her dreams grew to big for the silver screen
Her pale grey eyes turned an emerald green
Pour myself a bourbon and drain my cup
Stare out the window as the music picks up
And if this is where we part ways
I'll remember you as you are today
And forever you'll stay in my mind
A beauty that need never surrender to time
X2
Linky Linky click me.
Thanks for reading.
I've been lurking in this forum for a little bit now, checking things out and whatnot, and I decided it would be cool to post something of mine.
Recording quality wise, it's pretty weak, recorded straight through a single microphone as that's all I have going right now, I've been working on getting equipment and honing my recording skills, but I'm still fairly terrible.

The song is called Waltz for a Hollywood Backlot, a big consideration I had while I was writing it was an efficient use of language, I wanted it to be as simple as possible and for every line to be as meaningful as possible...whether or not I've achieved that remains to be seen

You and I in black and white
Glamour darling we're hollywood tonight
The Heroine has a secret she's too guarded to tell
Turns to leave as the orchestra swells
And if this is where we part ways
I'll remember you as you are today
And forever you'll stay in my mind
A beauty that need never surrender to time
Her dreams grew to big for the silver screen
Her pale grey eyes turned an emerald green
Pour myself a bourbon and drain my cup
Stare out the window as the music picks up
And if this is where we part ways
I'll remember you as you are today
And forever you'll stay in my mind
A beauty that need never surrender to time
X2
Linky Linky click me.
Thanks for reading.
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