unfinished love song for my fat girlfriend

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i'm trying to win my fat girlfriend brenda back. so im working on dis song. i only gots one verse so far and ITS NOT NEAR COMPLETE! i figured i would let you freaks tell me what you think so far and what to add.

 
No, no, one verse is enough. If she doesn't come back to you after that, she wasn't meant to be yours. Okay maybe you do need a second verse to complete the story about her girth. You mentioned it, so it must be important to you and you need to express that.

Go ahead, we're listening.

:D
 
Yeah, it's long enough. Good stuff. Brenda, I love you.
 
why, I was just in Walmart and I saw 100 Brendas there for the taking. And I hadn't even gone to the candy aisle.

The grease on her face was a touching moment and I'll never look at a slice of pepperoni pizza the same way again.
 
Yea, couple of more lines would work on this one. Are you wearing a mullet hair style? Most guys that have Brenda for girlfriend seem to have mullets.
 
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