I'm In Love With Supergirl

TripleM

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Let me know what your mix thoughts are.



I'm In Love With Supergirl
This ain't your typical ordeal
Nothing runs at an even keel
Now my girl's rockin tights and heels
See I'm in love with the Girl of Steel
Your girl might look cute in lace
But my girl comes from different place
Sometimes she leaves without a trace
I swear she came from outer space
Relationships like this get strange
But she's the upper end of the dating range
Time with her gets tricky to arrange

CHORUS
Everything is right I'm in love with Supergirl
We'll fly off to some kind of dreamworld
Sweet talking super hero
That's my baby
Is it any wonder I'm in love with Supergirl
The tells and inuendo start to swirl
Time passes fast but she don't mind
Strike a pose for womankind
My Supergirl

I comb my hair she's not impressed
It goes just like you would have guessed
She smiles at me more than the rest
But damn it she ignores my texts
Some dates might get put on pause
Anything can happen and it usually does
We don't take selfies just because
Her pre-nup has a certain clause
Bullets miss without a glance
She's says that I might have a chance
I just need to call in advance

CHORUS

BRIDGE
I'd love to see her paycheck
She a whirlwind of a girlfriend
We went viral - what the heck
I'm afraid that she and I will end
Today

Maybe I should write this song again
And hope we're more than just two friends
At least I sort of can pretend
But I don't understand the trends
She weathers every single storm
In her flame retardant uniform
She's breaking every hero norm
With genuine artistic form
They don't mess around where she comes from
She's worth her weight in titanium
If you don't know the words by now just hum

CHORUS
CHORUS
 
I would like to hear the vocals a bit higher. I would say more space, but that isn't a problem to my ears. Everything stays the same, but either a EQ boost where the vocals stand out or just pure track boost.

Other than that, I couldn't hear anything not pleasant. Kind of has that Nick Lowe/Rockpile vibe.
 
Fun song. I dig the light, fun vibe. Sounds good. A bit long and repetitive, though. I know that sometimes these things are done once you print it - but if you were going to enter this song into a song contest or want to elevate it in some other way, you may want to consider condensing it a little in order to be more concise. But yeah - that was fun:thumbs up:
 
Yah that was fun. Not too long for me. Could possibly let a little bit of the lower end in it seem a little lacking there. A
So agree with DM about the vocals could be up just a tad
Guy
 
Thanks everyone.

I often have a hard time with the lead vocal level. But this mix, for some reason, is more difficult than most. I'll play a little with EQ.

I'll also listen to the low end again. I like a little lighter low end than most people do. So it makes sense that other people would think it's lacking. But that's just me.

Thanks again.
 
Super catchy fun vibe. Is that acoustic guitar panned a bit right? I really like that, tight strumming, adds a lot to the songs groove , love the vocals/lyrics. Agree a bit more lowend might sound nice and fill out the mix a bit.
 
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