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The Ghost of FM
Banned
The ad looks pretty good but I'd drop the section where you list its shortcomings. Better to just say that you've modded it to improve its performance rather then fix known issues.
Maybe also offer the ability to deliver it within a reasonable distance if the buyer doesn't have appropriate transportation. Maybe also list what the mixer originally sold for. And state that its British made, rather then just saying "brit", which not everyone might immediately understand the abbreviated word.
Also, leave out the fact that you've now reduced the price. This tells buyers you're stuck with it and growing more desperate. Also talk about why you're selling it.
Hope that helps a bit.
Cheers!
Maybe also offer the ability to deliver it within a reasonable distance if the buyer doesn't have appropriate transportation. Maybe also list what the mixer originally sold for. And state that its British made, rather then just saying "brit", which not everyone might immediately understand the abbreviated word.
Also, leave out the fact that you've now reduced the price. This tells buyers you're stuck with it and growing more desperate. Also talk about why you're selling it.
Hope that helps a bit.
Cheers!