Please rate my song, not how its recorded :-)

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Hey, i recorded this song about a year ago on a considerably worse system to my current one. could u be pretty harsh and tell me how to improve the song. Thanks a lot

 
The Song...

is really good...I like the vocals a lot --- great voice...very cool.

I won't comment on the recording itself because it sounds from what you are saying that you are going to rerecord this at some point....

So that being said the only thing I have say is that the breakdown you do at the end.....Why don't you but that somewhere in the middle of the song...I know you kinda get chugging along there, but I honestly think a little dynamic in the middle of the tune might be interesting.
I would even keep the breakdown at the end as well.

post again once you re record it (if that's what you have planned)
 
Thanks very much. I will re record this but it wont be for some time since exams are coming up. :-S
 
I'd like to hear some feedback from the guitars, maybe a little raunchier too.
 
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