Please criticize my Vocals! :) Again! :)

  • Thread starter Thread starter lancelot0888
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It's a little off-pitch some of the time, and you go into this really nasally whining sound sometimes that gets super annoying...you pretty much do it every time you say the line "what's been said between your heart and mine" on the "what" and sometimes on "mine." Just sounds like you're forcing it too hard on those notes, like you're clenching your abs and throat or something. Just relax a little bit.
 
Sometimes a little out of pitch but I liked it, ahh, and sometimes some nasal probs!
 
Definitely I'd focus on the chorus improving the pitch; maybe try some lip trills to make your word transitions smoother and more melodic; but overall I likey :)
 
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