Original tune: “It’s OK” (Kinda soft/loud alternative with some rock/emo elements)

[Flyguitarfish]

Here’s a different one for me. Just curious how the mix is coming across. Vocal levels are the hardest for me to judge. I don’t need everything to be intelligible or the focus of every part. I’ll hold off on posting lyrics for now and see what you think. I’d love to hear your thoughts. Thanks!

 

[Papanate]

Here’s a different one for me. Just curious how the mix is coming across. Vocal levels are the hardest for me to judge. I don’t need everything to be intelligible or the focus of every part. I’ll hold off on posting lyrics for now and see what you think. I’d love to hear your thoughts. Thanks!

View attachment 152814

Nice Pop Psychedelic tune.

 

[Flyguitarfish]

Nice Pop Psychedelic tune.

Nice…Pop Pschedelic! That’s a new one!
The weirdest part is the lyrics but you probably can’t understand them!

 

[dobro]

Those lyrics you speak of are completely intelligible in the chorus at 1.20, but are way less clear with the declaiming verse that follows. Part of that is because the vocal's necessarily a bit rushed to get the words out. But bring the vocal in the verse up?

Nice one.