Original Song

[mrjlr]

I've only written 3 songs in my life.

Back story, after 12 years the love of my life came back! We agreed we can't stop loving each other....

I wrote this a few months ago when we first started talking again about getting back together.

If any women listen to this, would you like your man to write something like this for you? I haven't shared it with her yet...should I?

What do ya think?

Is it a keeper or a stinker?

Jeff



View attachment What You Doing To Me (1).mp3

 

[Arv]

Only 3 songs!? You should write more this is a great song! Especially let your partner hear it. Nice guitar work too.
As far as I am concerned you mixed this pretty darn good. I listened to the whole tune.... and that guitar... you know your
way around it well.

 

[mrjlr]

Only 3 songs!? You should write more this is a great song! Especially let your partner hear it. Nice guitar work too.
As far as I am concerned you mixed this pretty darn good. I listened to the whole tune.... and that guitar... you know your
way around it well.

Thank you!
I really do want to start writing more!

I'm working up the nerve to let her hear it...!

 

[Serendipity Records]

That's a really nice tune, and yeah, you should keep writing! Backstories are very important to me and hell yeah, congrats to you both

 

[mrjlr]

That's a really nice tune, and yeah, you should keep writing! Backstories are very important to me and hell yeah, congrats to you both

Thank you!
Those lyrics are basically verbatim true!
I will continue to write....I'll share as I go!!!

 

[jeffguitar]

Very good stuff. Good guitar playing and I like the lyrics too. My goodness, of course you should let her hear it, she will really like it.

 

[mrjlr]

Very good stuff. Good guitar playing and I like the lyrics too. My goodness, of course you should let her hear it, she will really like it.

Thank you!
I played it for her - she loved it!!!!!
I was so nervous about what she would think!