on a scale of one to two, let me know what you think

[cello_pudding]

its not bad to say someone sounds like someone. i'm sorry i like clean guitar parts, i'm a guitar performance/recording major.

RUFUS still pops in my head right when i hear the voice come in.

 

[pikingrin]

sounds real good the way it is. it almost seems that it says all that really needs to be said, and to try and make it longer might hurt it a little. just another man's opinion. 2 as is...

 

[Monkey Allen]

Yeah, the tuning has a lot going for it. How's the EP?

 

[grn]

EP is slower going than I had hoped, but maybe this little holiday break will give me some time to finish it up.

 

[phillwildman]

It sounds to me like the performer has had a stroke or something.

 

[grn]

I haven't had a stroke... yet... hmm. Do you mean because of the articulation?

 

[phillwildman]

Yeah, thats the one

 

[grn]

oooooh I see how it is

 

[Nalencer]

I liked that funky sound on the guitar, and your vocal was pure Dylan. I gotta say, the lyrics seems a bit rough, but when you hear it actually played, it's nice.

 

[grn]

what does that mean, "the lyrics seems a bit rough"

 

[Grey Angel]

I gave it a listen. I'd say that you used your voice very well, except for when you sounded like you were struggling to get those really low notes... But hey, that's cool, too; gives it a bit of an unconventional twist. It'd be mind-boggling to have like a crashing heavymetalpowersolo/bridge towards the end, though I think that the length my be just right. Over all, I give it a

Y-intercept=1.895866646

or, if you were talking plane geometry:
tan(62.19)

 

[grn]

I prefer it in sinusoidal

 

[Grey Angel]

I prefer it in sinusoidal

No idea what that is...sounds like you might need to go see the ear, nose, and throat doctor

 

[Feanor IV]

Nice song, flows easily and smoothly and has an indie feeling to it, as suggested already. Still, I really really think it needs a nice bridge somewhere. I really care for "anchors" in songs, something to be waiting for while you're listening to "the rest" of it.