hi all wrote some lyrics and cant really tell if they are up to much, opinions and pointers would be appreciated
thx
V1
Reliving past mistakes
We're stuck on the same page in history
It's so much more work so much less play
And it all seems so clear to me
It all seems so clear to me
V2
Consuming more than we can make
Thats a 1st world luxury
Get offered more than i can take
But it's just shit i dont want or need
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
V3
Disliking folk we'll never know
Afraid we'll lose our share
I watch you come you'll watch me go
And no-one stopped to care
And no-one stopped to care
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
Bridge
Stand by my side for a while
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
any advise would be greatly appreciated
Cheers
Davo
thx
V1
Reliving past mistakes
We're stuck on the same page in history
It's so much more work so much less play
And it all seems so clear to me
It all seems so clear to me
V2
Consuming more than we can make
Thats a 1st world luxury
Get offered more than i can take
But it's just shit i dont want or need
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
V3
Disliking folk we'll never know
Afraid we'll lose our share
I watch you come you'll watch me go
And no-one stopped to care
And no-one stopped to care
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
Bridge
Stand by my side for a while
Chorus
Show me the love
Show me the love
any advise would be greatly appreciated
Cheers
Davo