New song

[muzeman]

Sam,thanks bro!
I'm still trying to work out the production.
Trying to write the lyrics too,it's tough!

"needless solos, keys, and extensions.. "
My speciality!

Thanks Chad,I took the acoustic out in the beggining,just couldn't get a good lead sound.
It's been really humid here,think it's wackin my mic out!
Thanks for the comments on the electric,think I'm going to keep that as my main sound.

erichenryus,thanks for your reply,I appreciate your suggestions.
My best friend died a couple of years ago,havn't had anyone to play with since.

I still havn't worked on the drum track,I don't record on a computer,so I can't do loops.
Never heard Hunger Strike,I'll try to find it and check it out.
I know my singing is pretty lame, I'm trying to work on delivery.
Some day!
Thanks!

Mike,Hi buddy,thanks,I'm glad you liked it!
Ya,I wish I had some real drums,someday mabey one of those nice Akai samplers!

Llarion,Thanks very much for your comments.
I'm still trying to get a good drum sound.
I agree about the snare,I wanted a loose LA sound,but the machine I have right now dosn't have one.
Going to work on the kick too,mabey double it with two differant ones.

Thanks,
Pete

 

[Fed]

listening to the second version ... those guitar squicks are little harsh ... is there a snare in there somewhere?... I'd bring vocals up a bit too... nice song idea... little too short as it is now...