Maybe if you could turn off every processing plugin and let us hear the raw material we could help? All we hear is the stacked end result of random processing. When you slap these things on, do you hear what they do? Are you adjusting the parameters? I hope in a way you're not - because the destructive commutative effect
must be audible as you add each one. You seem to have a cymbal 'sheen' after 2 mins that lasts for ages - something a drummer just cannot do with 2 arms - a constant schhhhhhhiiiing. Some of the guys hear like taking stems from people with problems and seeing if they can mix and balance them.
I can't work out of you are doing a good mix, then wrecking it with the processing, or are processing each track badly then trying to mix that. Can you hear the difference between that Mogwai track and yours? Can you hear what we're talking about.
My music is totally different to yours. The only track that we've done that is metal-is is this one - and listening back, I've no idea why we left the drums so snare heavy - there must have been a reason. It was originally a track in a video for an electronic circuit board for an industrial machine process (that's the kind fo dull stuff we do) It's never designed to be listened to, just in the background. It does however reveal how things can be loud but clean.