need mixing suggestions

[hhinterwebz]

this is a rough draft of a song i made as an intro for my upcoming album. and its all fucked up right now:
zombiemix1.wav - 4shared.com - music and mp3 sharing - download
u guys are the mix experts. can you hear the vocals alright? hows aboot the dynamics and shit? alot of the vocals are getting redone, but i just need an honest opinion on it right now.

 

[cobaltaudio]

can hear the vocals fine. the backing track is a bit bland though, more work with a producer with some experience would help.

if you want more opinions, this should really go in the 'mp3 clinic', not 'mixing techniques'

cheers!

 

[NYMorningstar]

Try posting this in the MP3 clinic and you'll get more responses:
https://homerecording.com/bbs/general-discussions/mp3-mixing-clinic/