NEED FEEDBACK ON A MIX. GENRE: RAP/ HIP HOP

[alley_boy12]

WASS UP EVERYONE! NOT SURE HOW THIS WORKS...NEED FEEDBACK ON A MIX. IM NOT A PROFESSIONAL (OBVIOUSLY!). HOWEVER I LIKE TO THINK IM FAMILIAR WITH THE BASICS AND TECHNIQUES AND PERHAPS IM TOO HARD ON MYSELF. ANYWHO IM AN INDEPENDENT RAP ARTIST AND FROM TIME TO TIME I MIX MY OWN STUFF...I USE REAPER DAW. IF ANYONE CAN TAKE THE TIME TO RESPOND WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. THANK YOU.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kcmwlIZPSbgSDEv5Ezz-jEwfA7Crk43q/view?usp=share_link MIXED WITH REAPER/ STOCK PLUG INS ONLY/ PEAKS AT -3.6 DB

 

[HumanPlanet]

Immediate thoughts are the vocals are a bit boxy and dry and the beat is sitting on top of the vocal.

 

[alley_boy12]

Immediate thoughts are the vocals are a bit boxy and dry and the beat is sitting on top of the vocal.

OK OK. IM A GO BACK AND E.Q...AND BOOST THE VOCALS! APPRECIATE YOU. THANK YOU!

 

[ClarkeC93]

I love the beat the lyrics are good but I feel like there can be more

 

[alley_boy12]

I love the beat the lyrics are good but I feel like there can be more

thanx! appreciate you!