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I see some improvement, but the main thing you need to study up on is riding the beat. You might want to use a metronome to make sure your rhymes are on point with the tempo of the beat. The lyrics are nice, but the delivery sounds like you're trying to sell me a vacuum at my front door. No offense, but I think riding the beat is one of your weak points that needs to be more focused on. Do that and I can see a nice flip on your music.

Fie.
 
I agree, you dont ride the beat.
you have to be hard on yourself and cut stuff out so it fits on beat.
I think your trying to say too much.
too many syllables throws you off rhthym.
there is improvement though.
keep with it, you have a crazy amount of potential.
how long have you been rhyming?
 
I know that most of the stuff that makes it onto a beat is highly edited because I talk too much in bars. Luckily, most of it is profanity LOL.

What are you using to record your tracks in? I know that Cubase has a metronome built in so that you can practice riding the beat and see what goes good where before you actually record it.

It's good to see a younger cat who's got real potential and just needs to be brushed up properly.

Fie.
 
just use the snares as the metronome.
follow the snares and youul be on beat.
 
Got it; will do.

And btw, I've been rhyming (verbally) for two weeks; I think someone asked.
 
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