Lil Brotha (it's been a while)

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Crack, that beat was maad amazin, nice beat, dope lyrics and mixing was very good, the lyrics kinda confused me tho, is this baout your brothers or a symbolic thing? GOOD WORK THO!
 
The beat aint mine so I wont take credit for that...but as for the lyrics I wrote it because I am the youngest of 3 brothers and they've been away from me for a while, so it's kinda about how I've changed.
 
ammarg89 said:
Crack, that beat was maad amazin, nice beat, dope lyrics and mixing was very good, the lyrics kinda confused me tho, is this baout your brothers or a symbolic thing? GOOD WORK THO!
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You're getting better lil homie!

But I gotta hit you with honest feed!

The mix needs lot of work. The vocals need to be treated to compliment the beat better. What are you recording at? I'm listening on my laptop, but it seems like it's damn near clipping. (If it hasn't already!) You should record dry and add effects in the mix, but don't OVER USE! (Reverb, Chorus, Flanger, etc....) Try doubling up your vocals at times. It doesn't sound like you are using the eq properly. Do you have monitors? What sound are you getting from your finished product compared to a commercial sound through the same monitors?
Lyrics are better!
Still sound a bit hesitant like you're reading. It's not flowing off your tongue with confidence. You need to establish a flow with all your lyrics. Spit like you wrote it! It's your work be proud of it! OWN IT!!!!!
Like I mentioned you're making progress. I love the concept!
Real good concept! I like the direction you went with the lyrics, but make sure it fits..........Don't over use vocab, just tell your story!!!!

Much better than your other stuff!

Keep at it, I hear progress...................
 
Well I record in my room with an AT4040...nothing special. I don't have any hardware for mixing, so I just use plugins (cuz I'm broke).
 
Physical Ill said:
Well I record in my room with an AT4040...nothing special. I don't have any hardware for mixing, so I just use plugins (cuz I'm broke).
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Okay!

It explains much of what I heard!

Well at least you know what you need to do to step your game up!
 
Aww chyea...what kind of stuff would you recommend first?
 
Well in the meantime, if you're serious, work on your flow.......

Write lyrics and spit them with con-fi-dence!

Invest in time right now, that would be your best friend because it's free!

Then you can slowly grab what you need.

What do you have in you complete setup?

Include things that are not even in your chain!

Once your comfortable with your flow Time turns into Money!


It all depends on what direction you're trying to go in. (Production, Writer, Artist, or a combination of all)
 
You've Improved Sooo much youngin'. I can't begin to tell you. A couple phrase stumbles here and there tho nothing major. Nice hook too. Mos def keep em coming
 
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