Life will kill you....

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I really like the feel to this one...it's more somber than some of your others. Nice guitar lines....great vibe. Good sounds...tones are nice, and the solo is cool. Good playing man.

I like this alot...and I heard nothing that sounded out of place to me. :cool:
 
Nice song. I think the main vocal could come up generally, also the lead gtr solo at 4:08. The rhythm gtrs sound especially good.
 
I think the BD-Sound could be improved. Especially in the verses it sounds too flabby(?), which I think is an EQ issue. Or maybe it is just a little bit too loud? The rimclicks could use some presence to let them cut through more. And I think I would like to hear some longer reverb on the drums, especially in the verses.
 
I like the way this track takes a journey - almost prog!
The vocal stacking is cool.
At times I thought the bass needed an edge - maybe a little 3khz boost.
I agree with Tim re the solo but am happy with the way the vox sit.
Some well developed guitar fills too.
RAMI - you always please but often amaze.
 
I love the lyrics and the chord pattern on the chorus sections of this song! It made me stand up and take notice. :cool:
 
Guys...I really appreciate all the comments and suggestions. A lot of the comments confirmed what I suspected, but was in denial about. So, I have to re-write the verses and work on a few things.

I apologise to anyone clicking the link now and finding it dead. I had to take the song down. It was the first time I put up a song that far from being finished. I knew it was far from being done, but hoped to put it up and get some ideas. And the comments were pretty much consistent, which helped alot.

I'm taking it down and re-writing the verses completely. And an obvious re-mix is in order.

Thanx guys, I'll re-post it when I get it a little closer to complete.
 
RAMI said:
Guys...I really appreciate all the comments and suggestions. A lot of the comments confirmed what I suspected, but was in denial about. So, I have to re-write the verses and work on a few things.

I apologise to anyone clicking the link now and finding it dead. I had to take the song down. It was the first time I put up a song that far from being finished. I knew it was far from being done, but hoped to put it up and get some ideas. And the comments were pretty much consistent, which helped alot.

I'm taking it down and re-writing the verses completely. And an obvious re-mix is in order.

Thanx guys, I'll re-post it when I get it a little closer to complete.
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Well, thppth. And I didn't even get to rag on you for being a horrible musician. :)
 
RAMI said:
I'm taking it down and re-writing the verses completely. And an obvious re-mix is in order.
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Fuck with the chorus and I'll call for a Jihad on you! :eek: ;) :)
 
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