Suggestions ....
Definitely Nirvana .....
I didn't care for the lead vocal doubling the guitar at the intro. Can't put a finger on it though.
At about 1:02 (1st chorus), I hear a "screaming guitar" in the right speaker along with the rhythm guitar. I'd move it to the opposite side - I think it would be more effective.
Coming out of the first chorus, I'd be sure to bring the drums down some. It will help accent the contrast of the "head banging" chorus and "delicate" verse. Probably true for other verses as well.
2nd Chorus: Harmony starting at 2:05 ... good. High harmony at 2:10 ..... great !!! .... with one minor exception, you step it down on the word "hurrah". Any chance of keeping it "up there" on "hurrah" ... and even until the lead guitar? Bring it back at 3:25 too.
Finally, at 3:59, where it quiets down to just a distorted guitar and "blowpipe" (?). I'd quickly fade out the distorted guitar and bring in the "arpeggio" guitar sooner. I think quiet ending with the "blowpipe" is very effective, but the distorted guitar gets in the way.
Great start. It will be very cool when finished.
Waiting for the final ........
BPOCO
Definitely Nirvana .....
I didn't care for the lead vocal doubling the guitar at the intro. Can't put a finger on it though.
At about 1:02 (1st chorus), I hear a "screaming guitar" in the right speaker along with the rhythm guitar. I'd move it to the opposite side - I think it would be more effective.
Coming out of the first chorus, I'd be sure to bring the drums down some. It will help accent the contrast of the "head banging" chorus and "delicate" verse. Probably true for other verses as well.
2nd Chorus: Harmony starting at 2:05 ... good. High harmony at 2:10 ..... great !!! .... with one minor exception, you step it down on the word "hurrah". Any chance of keeping it "up there" on "hurrah" ... and even until the lead guitar? Bring it back at 3:25 too.
Finally, at 3:59, where it quiets down to just a distorted guitar and "blowpipe" (?). I'd quickly fade out the distorted guitar and bring in the "arpeggio" guitar sooner. I think quiet ending with the "blowpipe" is very effective, but the distorted guitar gets in the way.
Great start. It will be very cool when finished.
Waiting for the final ........
BPOCO