Its me Again..Mix n Dry Sample

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first off,thanks to all those that helped me last time..

www.soundclick.com/blackscope ..top of the page,mixed and dry


now..here's a dry sample. if u guys could tell me what i should do to the mix(highs,lows,mids) to adjust it and what effects wut sound right wit it...
and theirs a mixed sample,wit effects, i mixed in headphones due to no speakers..but let me know how the mix came out..thanks

 

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can some1 help

 

[Dogman]

Mix sample is put together pretty well. Clean sounds, and a clean voice. I can hear it all.
Good job.
Ed

 

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thanks,
im mainly concerned about the vocal part but if u'd like to give me some tips on how to make the beat sound cleaner thanks

 

[bad news]

Mix sample is put together pretty well. Clean sounds, and a clean voice. I can hear it all.
Good job.
Ed

yoo..i forgot to say, im the second verse,dont know which one u peeped..but i reuploaded jus my verse, so if u can peep agin n let me know
thanks.

 

[mcolling]

Hahahaha! You drop the lucrative "big mac" rhyme! Hope you cash in on that one.

 

[bad news]

wut u mean?