It seemed more like a jam than a fleshed out song.
The rhythm guitar was a little on the thin side. Was there some sort of chorus or flange effect on it? It didn't seem to be the right sound for this type of song.
I'm on small headphones, so I can't be sure. But you might want a little more solid low-end to the song - a stronger bass and more lows from the guitars. A more well defined attack on the bass would probably sound cool on a song like this.
The drums go on past the end of the song and there's a few seconds of silence past that.
Thanks. Good comments. I don't have a bass so I just tried to turn all the controls to bass so yes, it's thin. I have not quite figured out all the mixing controls yet. Yes, it's definitely a jam and not a song.
