First song ever recorded, some feedback please?

[VomitHatSteve]

Yep. That sounds like an improvement. Especially on the vocal pitches.

 

[CMB Studios]

High Hats are tooooo loud, a much better mix so far, and is your singer british or does he pretend to have an accent when he sings?

 

[TheAquired]

thanks guys, I'll look into the high hats. Well, we're South African, and us in particular have a "slight" British sounding accent. Especially if your used to American accents, but overall, yes I think he does put on a bit of an accent. That's just him though. Is it a problem?

 

[CMB Studios]

thanks guys, I'll look into the high hats. Well, we're South African, and us in particular have a "slight" British sounding accent. Especially if your used to American accents, but overall, yes I think he does put on a bit of an accent. That's just him though. Is it a problem?

its not a problem... i grew up when greenday got big.... and every singer i heard from then on had a fake british accent to sing with to try to sound like greenday... so whenever i hear it i hate it. lol

 

[TheAquired]

haha well, its more real than fake.

 

[dobro]

Hi Everyone, so I have totally rerecorded this song. Please, I would love your feedback.

Yeah, this is a nice listen. Beautiful tune. Plus, I like it when somebody makes a DI guitar work.

 

[TheAquired]

Yeah, this is a nice listen. Beautiful tune. Plus, I like it when somebody makes a DI guitar work.

Thanks so much! I really appreciate feedback like that! Yes its all raw input, nothing between my interface and the guitar, besides a cable. Is an amp generally a better option? because I tried hooking mine up to my interface but I got a humming sound. Only thing I could think of was its a mono cable. I'll experiment with it some time.

 

[dobro]

You connected your amp to your interface? Why not just mike it? Oh, hang on... you just connected your guitar to your interface. Got it. Yeah, that usually sucks.

 

[JimmyS1969]

I would really suggest getting a more human feel with the hh's. The robotic nature of them really distracts from the song for me.

Good progression so far though. Getting there man.

 

[CrowsofFritz]

Ahhh.... this reminds me of my first recordings.


I've been meaning to post them, but my friend is in possession of all of them. I gotta get him to email me some of them!