i think the intro guitar part could use some tightening up. it's kinda sloppy as it is, but not too bad. i think the guitar and bass are pretty dry compared to all that's going on, reverb-wise, with the drums and vocals. is the same verb applied to the guitars and bass? i'd add the guitar bus to the reverb send as well as a touch of the bass, if it's not (can't tell, sorry), and then i'd shorten the tail of the reverb a touch. not much, just a little.
when that snare drum comes in, there's suddenly a ton of reverb I couldn't notice prior.
very good, otherwise.
edit: i forgot to mention that i really like this vocal. great voice and delivery. i'd def listen to more of this. great job