Critique plz :)

[heatmiser]

Wow...you've gotten some pretty good feedback so far...a lot to work with. I really liked this a lot. The recording has some oddities about it, but I love the tune and the performance.

I was really taken by the minimal kick/snare combo which sounded very natural and full. I can't remember the last time I heard drums done this way and I like it.

I hear some distortion whether intended or otherwise that wasn't entirely pleasing, but mostly the mix stuff on something like this is so subjective for me as I have no frame of reference and am unsure what sort of mix you're going for...really like the song though .

 

[stringtheory]

the vocal sticks out to much they don't sit well in the mix. They could use some reverb, they clipped twice in the song. I dig the minalistic aproach. I like the guitars. I love the kick drum. I'd like to hear more snare drum and I'd like to hear a standardish panning arangment. It helps with getting things to sit well in the mix. and it could use a bass guitar part and diffrent aproach to background vocals. I'd add more in the verses and less on the chourus but thats just me. I'd add background vocals to the second she dont mind and as long as i treat her right that feels like the hook of the song to me cool tune

thx for listening and for the feedback

 

[stringtheory]

Wow...you've gotten some pretty good feedback so far...a lot to work with. I really liked this a lot. The recording has some oddities about it, but I love the tune and the performance.

I was really taken by the minimal kick/snare combo which sounded very natural and full. I can't remember the last time I heard drums done this way and I like it.

I hear some distortion whether intended or otherwise that wasn't entirely pleasing, but mostly the mix stuff on something like this is so subjective for me as I have no frame of reference and am unsure what sort of mix you're going for...really like the song though .

thx for listening heatmiser