Complications

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Well let’s see if I’ve learned anything in the past 6 months. This one is not finished but I thought I’d start early getting advice on the mix
cheers. Guy
 

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Well let’s see if I’ve learned anything in the past 6 months. This one is not finished but I thought I’d start early getting advice on the mix
cheers. Guy
This is nice. Pleasant to listen to. My only negative is that everything needs more balls. Drums, guitar. It's like they're through a filter and not getting the whole spectrum or something. I'd also shorten some of the instrumental parts. Nice, but gets repetitive. Good work. I like it.
 
I agree with the comment that the performances need more balls. Really stab the acoustic guitar. Smooth out the lead playing - it sounds like you're practicing.

Drum samples are OK, but just OK. The toms are REALLY wide. A few too many tom rolls.

At first I didn't care for the acoustic guitar tone - but by the end, I liked it.
 
love the acoustic guit sound. Agree with TripleM that it could use a bit more balls in the playing.
The electric lacks a bit of direction. Play it like you feel it. Maybe less notes. Sometimes plays a bit too much over the vocals.
nice vocals.
toms are a bit wide, the rest of the mix seems a bit narrow. Maybe less rolls, apart from that nice drum track.
 
This is nice. Pleasant to listen to. My only negative is that everything needs more balls. Drums, guitar. It's like they're through a filter and not getting the whole spectrum or something. I'd also shorten some of the instrumental parts. Nice, but gets repetitive. Good work. I like it.
Yes thinking about shortening that intro section half as long. Trying to emulate the Tragically Hip on this one which is proving difficult but will keep on it.
thanks for the input
 
I agree with the comment that the performances need more balls. Really stab the acoustic guitar. Smooth out the lead playing - it sounds like you're practicing.

Drum samples are OK, but just OK. The toms are REALLY wide. A few too many tom rolls.

At first I didn't care for the acoustic guitar tone - but by the end, I liked it.
Yah electric was done in 2 takes almost like a place holder for that part. Will probably narrow the spread on the toms too
thanks for the input
 
love the acoustic guit sound. Agree with TripleM that it could use a bit more balls in the playing.
The electric lacks a bit of direction. Play it like you feel it. Maybe less notes. Sometimes plays a bit too much over the vocals.
nice vocals.
toms are a bit wide, the rest of the mix seems a bit narrow. Maybe less rolls, apart from that nice drum track.
Thanks and noted
 
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