SLuiCe
New member
Hey there Pete...
Nice recording and song...
Personal opinions....
Guitar lead in the intro could come down a notch or two, especially if you want that harmonica to come in smoothly without over-filling an already crowding room. In other words, it's just the intro and it sounds like a middle build-up to me. All the parts are very nice, I just think the levels could be adjusted.
Vocals seem to be sitting very nicely on my end. Wonderful voice there too! Is there some chorus on it too? Sounds nice. When you say "I know it's there, if I can find a way" it sounded like "fuckin find a way" which of course is very different That's just me and I work with construction guys all day.
OK right there at 2:00...that's the level I think the lead in the beginning should be, or some where around it. That's a nice touch by the way.
nitpicky...around 3:35 ish...the words "when" and "find" sound forced...could be smoother. I don't hear in the rest of the song...I kinda like the character of it (and I have some heavy quirks to my singing, so grain of salt should be applied here ), but it's just slightly, ever slightly distracting. Just depends on how picky you wanna get.
All in all fantastic song...great vibe, and heartfelt. It just needs some bass and drums to give it some wider dynamics, but that's a matter of taste. The parts that are there already are vey tasty. Great job!
Nice recording and song...
Personal opinions....
Guitar lead in the intro could come down a notch or two, especially if you want that harmonica to come in smoothly without over-filling an already crowding room. In other words, it's just the intro and it sounds like a middle build-up to me. All the parts are very nice, I just think the levels could be adjusted.
Vocals seem to be sitting very nicely on my end. Wonderful voice there too! Is there some chorus on it too? Sounds nice. When you say "I know it's there, if I can find a way" it sounded like "fuckin find a way" which of course is very different That's just me and I work with construction guys all day.
OK right there at 2:00...that's the level I think the lead in the beginning should be, or some where around it. That's a nice touch by the way.
nitpicky...around 3:35 ish...the words "when" and "find" sound forced...could be smoother. I don't hear in the rest of the song...I kinda like the character of it (and I have some heavy quirks to my singing, so grain of salt should be applied here ), but it's just slightly, ever slightly distracting. Just depends on how picky you wanna get.
All in all fantastic song...great vibe, and heartfelt. It just needs some bass and drums to give it some wider dynamics, but that's a matter of taste. The parts that are there already are vey tasty. Great job!