Hi,
I think the guitars and synths kinda find their place once the vocals come in, but during the intro they sound a bit thin to me.
I'm not getting a lot of bass if I'm honest, but I know that's the weak spot of my monitoring setup, so don't take my word for it.
There's the odd timing flub like 1:17 guitars, 1:46-1:50 drums.
Sometimes the drums feel like they're doing more than is necessary, in a distracting kind of way.
Are there simultaneous kick/snare beats that stand out? That might be it.
Vocals are well placed. Everything's good and clear without overpowering.
Personally I'd pull the section at 2:00 back a lot more.
Those guitars feel a little relentless to me, but that sections lends itself to losing them, IMO.
Sounds awfully critical!
Good job and thanks for sharing.