"Black Haired Woman" original

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This is a song of mine, original music and lyrics. This was one of the first recordings I ever did, so the quality is terrible, but I'm just puttin it up here for your listening pleasure I guess. I know there are hundreds of things you could tell me is wrong with the mix, but I'm wondering what you guys think of it as an actual composition?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5340459&q=hi
 
I'd maybe drop the pause after the verse...to me it feels like too big a drop.
I'd probably add more vocals to the instrumental parts to fill it up a bit more. Either that or add some tasty leads to fill in the instrumental parts. Right now it seems like a long time between verses, with only rhythm guitars.
That's just my take on the composition.... It's a catchy tune though, so I would recommend keeping the riffs and vocals and just build from there.....

The recording isn't that bad BTW.... :cool:

:D :) :D :)
 
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